Never did I ever think that such a drastic change
would happen in my life just in a matter of months...
A couple months ago I was introduced to the idea of going to a
boarding school. I wasn’t very interested at first, but after visiting The
Webb School, I could not see myself anywhere else. After meeting a very
dedicated faculty and extremely engaged student body, I knew that I could not
pass such an opportunity. After many years going to a huge high school, I was
ready to have smaller classes and have many responsibilities. After a long
and intense application process, I got in and now I have a new home where I
could not be any happier. So with that, I do believe The Webb School is the
perfect fit for me.
Great! I am glad you like you here! I am glad to have you in my class. You have a few punctuation errors here.
ReplyDelete18/20
See my corrections in CAPS! Nice blog.
ReplyDeleteI knew that I could not pass such AN opportunity. After many years OF going to a huge high school, I was ready to have smaller classes and have many responsibilities. After a long and intense application process, I got in, and now, (ADD COMMAS) I have a new home where I could not be any happier. So with that, I do believe The Webb School is the perfect fit for me.
See my corrections in CAPS! Nice blog.
ReplyDeleteI knew that I could not pass such AN opportunity. After many years OF going to a huge high school, I was ready to have smaller classes and have many responsibilities. After a long and intense application process, I got in, and now, (ADD COMMAS) I have a new home where I could not be any happier. So with that, I do believe The Webb School is the perfect fit for me.