This year, I decided to only make a few New Year's
resolutions due to the fact that usually, I make too many of them and end up
not sticking to any. The fist resolution I would like to stick to this year is
to be successful academically. The steps I am taking are in progress and
will continue all year. The first step I have taken to help me achieve my goal was
transferring to Webb. Here, I will be able to focus on school completely and to get
the education I am looking for. My second and last resolution for this year is
to maintain a healthy life by working out and eating healthy. By sticking to
these simple resolutions, I will be able to live a healthy balanced life.
I agree. Making only a few resolutions seems more likely for success. But, who knows? I've already had quite a bit of trouble on my 3. :(
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I have received your correction. New grade: 16/20
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