It was a normal Sunday afternoon until a baby bunny appeared in a hat on my doorstep. I soon discover it had one special, magical ability. His magical ability was to give each human a special wish. I thought to myself "what would I ever wish? Or need right now" and soon it came to me that I has school the next day. So quickly I replied "I wish for a snow day!". The bunny told me he could do that and then turned around and ran away from me. I was really confused until I woke up the next morning and looked outside and saw everything covered in snow. It was the happiest day of my life.
The happiest day of your life!? Wow!
ReplyDeletePlease proofread your work. Lots of punctuation problems!
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